posted on 2024-05-02, 18:52authored byFirst World War Poetry Digital Archive Project Team
<p dir="ltr">Draft in pencil, with pencil alterations. In line 13 Isaac Rosenberg has extended the tail of the 'n' in 'man's', so that the line becomes 'Like a blind man dreams on the sand.' He has clearly highlighted stanza divisions by drawing lines of pencil dots.</p>